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Post #1Subject: Original poetry from IN members
ShadowVixen [1514043]

Level: 36

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#7 Good
Posted at: May 9 2011, 12:08:01 am


Please original poetry none copied from a book. Constructive criticism welcome but don't tear someone's work apart. Nothing good to say say nothing.

My offering to start this off:


Beautiful Chaos

Poison, Poison cazzadeathgirl by your side,
Warrables hunting, stemming the tide.
The bombs are set and doing their killin,
With money and gold our pockets are fillin.
The enemy keep comming much to our joy,
With profits from the war we will buy a new toy.
Warrables the house can not be hit,
For Poison's sure to have a fit.
Last enemy's comming lets send em to hell,
Then off to a merchant our treasure to sell.
Poison, Poison cazzadeathgirl by your side,
Warrables hunting, stemming the tide !

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Post #2Subject:
Violet [2]

Level: 701

Forum Rank:
#15 True Champion
Posted at: May 9 2011, 12:10:11 am


We already have a poetry thread. Please see if you can find that one first.
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